My Japanese Song - Mother (僕の日本語の詩/歌ーお母さん)

Hi everyone,

Here is my next Japanese song .The song is about Mother. The reason why am writing songs in Japanese is it is another way of learning Japanese. From my point of view ,Yes, of course you can learn new vocabulary and also improve your creativity.  so guys what you say ? am right or wrong ?.
Here is my Poem

お母さん

世界中で一番の人は
あなただよ。
神を見たことがないけど
僕にとって神はあなただよ。

何度も私に教えたことを
聞かなかった
離れていた時にはっきり
わかったよ。

家に帰って来る時
笑顔で”お帰り”
いつも言ってくれるね.

失敗したとき、悲しい時、
気分が悪い時
僕のそばにいて
抱擁して(抱き締めて)キッスして
元気にしてくれるよ。

あなたのことを死ぬまで
忘れたくないよ。
僕の目でとったあなたの写真を
消えずにずっと守るよ。
愛は死ぬまで欲しいんだよ.

English

 Mother

The best person in all over the world is you.
I have never seen God but
for me the God is you.

 I was not heard
 what you have taught(told) so many times.
I understood clearly when I am away from you.


When I back home
you always tell "Welcome Home"
with smiling face.
 
When I fail,when I feel sad,

When I feel sick, you always with me
and hug me, kiss me and make me healthy.

I don't want to forget you until dying.
I will protect the photo of you taken with my eyes
without disappearing.

I want love until dying.

This is it. So how is my Japanese Song. Send your feedback through comments or email .

Cheers
saravanan(サラヴァナン)

My First Japanese Poem(Song) - Important Person

hai every one

I usually go office by Public Bus (T-151) from Tambaram to Navallur. Yes my office is at Navallur. The travelling time is around 45 min. During the travelling time i will hear japanese song often. One day i heared a  japanese song entitled as Sotto kyutto  from SMAP. In that song one line make me to write a song (poem - actually i dont what it is. I left with you all.) about the precious(Important) person. Here the line from the Sotto Kyutto song



大切な　大切な　キミがそばにいて
ありふれた毎日が　カラフルになる

taisetsu na   taisetsu na   KIMI ga soba ni ite
arifureta mainichi ga   KARAFURU ni naru



When I have such an important, important person like you by my side
The ordinary everyday becomes colourful


今キミがそばにいること　それは　そう奇跡だ
 ima KIMI ga soba ni iru koto   sore wa   sou kiseki da

The fact that you are beside me now, it's a miracle

Yes in everyone's life there must be a important person who may turned everyone's life in a better way. The another day while travelling in bus i wrote these words (peom or song or just a simple sentence).


 大切な人

人々の気風がちゃうので
比べることをしないでね

君を愛している人は
一番大切な人だね
君の気持ちを感じる人は
ほんまに尊い人だね

大切な人が（君の）そばにいる時
守ることを忘れないでね
相手がそばにいてくれたら
君が何でもできるなんでね

好きな人がそばにいること
それはそう奇跡だ。
申し君が愛してたら
全部は綺麗に見るよ

だから皆を愛してください。。。


taisetsuna hito

hitobito no  kifuu ga chau node
kuraberu koto wo shinaidene

kimi wo aishiteiru hito ha
ichiban taisetsuna hito dane
kimi no kimochi wo kanjiru hito ha
honmani toutoi hito dane


taisetsuna hito ga (kimi no) soba ni iru toki
mamoru koto wo wasurenaidene
aite ga soba ni itekuretara
kimi ga nandemo dekiru nandene

sukina hito ha soba ni iru koto
sore ha sou kisekida
moushi kimi ga aishitetara
zenbu ha kirei ni miruyo..

dakara minna wo aishite kudasai......


Important Person

people charcter(traits) were different
so dont compare them with each other


The person who loves you is
the very most important person
The person who understands your feelings is
really a precious person

When important person is with you
dont forgot to protect(to look into him/her) them(him/her)
When your partner is with you
it is possible to do of anything by you

It is a miracle that
you always be with your favourite person(precious person)
If you are in love then
you will see everything as beautifull

so please be in love and lovable



This is it .. so how is it friends !! send me ur feedback through comments or mail

Thank you all
saran